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This it? Those two reviews don't sound at all like the ones you described. Either you got your friends to write golden reviews for you or you have two fans ...

Hi Flower, First of all, don't bump pieces to the top of the page; it's against site policy. I'm standing in the darkness The light of you is gone. The ...

Hi phantom, Though pains of the past still haunt like the shadow in a corner. It's either a shadow or it's in a corner. A shadow in a corner sounds ...

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Hi Justin, I am sorry that you have received no helpful criticism so far, but site policy forbids bumping threads for the sake of reviews. If you want an old ...

Try harder The same could be said of your efforts to find relevant reviewing material. Seriously, people, check the date of the original post before you respond.

Hi Warrior Princess Voices, voices all around me, Empty words and gilded lies; Darkness and despair surround me; I wait for a sun that may never rise. Voices of a ...

Poetry is allowed to be anything it wants, thats why its poetry. No. You're completely wrong. Listen to Kitty.

Hi alohajuice, Tell me u didnt feel my feet touching yours in the hot summery air by the pool, and in our room Or my hands feeling your butt, and ...

I reach my fists towards my scalp And pull at the dark blue roots, Tearing each follicle out. Last two lines make no sense. If you're pulling blindly at something, ...

Hi springrain, Eager to restrain us, it rises, an ugly recess, blocking us, monsters, programmed to daily observations, drowning and drenching us in the waters of stress, overtaking us, soaking ...

Nobody else compares to you, Absolutely no one. Believe me, I've tried a few. The wording and imagery is all wrong. Imagery - because there is none. It's just a ...

Hi kris, Cover me with roses; the kind one never finds. To dedicate your love for me. Cute? This cannot really be described because there is nothing to describe. I ...

I was steamed. Man, was I steamed. That girl - Jen? - had completely rejected me and threw my own poem back in my face. Well, no matter. I always ...