Galerius

Hi Kyllorac, Way too many words. Nobody has patience to read that much on a flier. Use concise points instead of that big paragraph, and take out the "So come ...

Hi Evi, First of all, the title can be absorbed into the first line of the poem or vice versa. You don't need to repeat. What did you do, pull ...

Damned beautiful.

i offer a way out, like the gift of an annexed land. Almost made me cringe. Not because it's "bad" - no, quite far from that - but rather because ...

Hi emoinpink, This has been gathering dust for three months and I'm still not sure what to do with it Keeping it on its present path of cryogenic sleep seems ...

Hi HessicaJolt, The title pretty much sums up an appropriate response. Your poem seems to be attempting to grow images haphazardly in a dark lab and then ripping them out ...

Battlesphere - by Lil_Pau It is said "When Sol awakens and gets out of bed, he'll torch his head and hair in a tangled mess of flame and scars, he ...

Meditate for a few days. And when you successfully meet Polaris between your closed eyes, you shall know that things will happen when they happen, and there's nothing any of ...

The Stranger is Watching - by PadrePio The guide to following yourself! A shadow entrenched is just the dark and learns to fly and play his part; gone one moment, ...

(If only you were) Mine - by popatemyheart1994 A hermit lives on the bottom of the cliff. Sometimes he sends me gifts of regolith and quartz, finished with polish and ...

Hush - by Jennafina Saturday and the night before we predict our death, store tablets for aches safely in bathroom walls where no one will erase them, stench of breaths ...

that soft classic music - by Yuriiko and MilknCookies A drop clutches onto the windshield, drained, skinny blotch on the pane like a bug's memory fading fast. Handel's on 94.4, ...

Something different here. Dropping a few poems from others, keeping the cores but razoring off all of the skin and wounding my own around it. You don't get to post ...

April Fools. None of us are arguing. Evi's actually an okay person, kind of. Now go and review or something.

April Fools. Read at your own risk! Alright. I'm sick and tired of keeping everything confined to PMs and such, so here goes. I never had deluded myself into thinking ...