Galerius

Hi whatever, He pushed me to the hard ground as the other two held my arms down. I squirmed as their grip tightened and stopped the blood circulation. He got ...

Hi Angel of Death, We walk down to the beach, the once gold sand and the perilous blue sky-reminding me of what used to be. Why is the sky perilous? ...

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Hi purplepastelpretty, Post pieces that are recent. Unless you're saying that you somehow have the exact same feelings that you did years ago, this poem is irrelevant and a waste ...

Your eyes locked in mine With the fierceness of a Lion on unsuspecting prey. I unwittingly reeled for a few Moments; I was completely Enraptured by your smile. Okay, at ...

Hi Black Rabbit, He lies. He is made of lies. He is made of lies, and nothing more. He lives to tell me lies. Lies that, through their filthy existence, ...

Hi pshhxhoney, There are thirteen reason why i slowly die inside The phrasing as well as the concept of "slowly dying inside" has been overused to the point of death ...

Hi Jabberoomba, Just returning the favor for all the critiques you've given me. I curl to your warmth, and you hold me tight. My tenseness is eased as we lay ...

Hi vixeyt, I remember once upon a time When skys were blue and grass was lime Our children laughed and all were pleased To live in a world that wasn’t ...

Hi Lost, I am aware of the large amount of grammatical errors Then fix them. Why do you need people to grammar check you? Feed not from my soul; For ...

Hi HelpyPanty (too lazy to type in your whole username), You did not long consider the clear shallow water hemming the river, I dun get it. Water doesn't hem rivers...water ...

Such potential wasted on such sub-par substance sustenance. Watch: of emeralds and rubies Is this the beginning of the poem, as well as being the title? If it is, then ...

Hi Gabe.L, Don't listen to the above comment, most of it is terrible advice. First of all, don't keep oscillating between how you spell the God's name. It's either Odin ...