Galerius

Hi Kylan, seasickness meiosis of the moon; splintered on the hump-backs of the new tide – tiny petals of white light water-born, like capsizing paperboats. Surely there's some other description ...

Plagiarism, my friend. Be a man and write your own work, thanks. Hope that helped, Galerius

Hi Boyfrand, Gonna give this one a general critique rather than a line by line because I think that's what it needs most. Alright, the flow. There is none. In ...

Hi Gahks, Press gang flashes camera Man holds up line of tanks carrying nil but a shopping bag Driver shouts from tank Cries, protestations, agony, fire, bullets split the sky ...

Hi JemimaPuddleDuck, If a swan, in its pure white elegance, was capable of the constant flittings of a bumblebee; If the solid oak, with roots deep would yeild the sweet ...

WRITE WHAT YOU KNOW. What do I know? I know about school driving on freeways those geriatric bastards in the fast cars video games herpetology mental disorders politically correct names ...

Hi Krupp, Feeling small, weak as dust. I’m falling far, too far for any hopes that something will break my fall. There was no lie created for us that we ...

I shall critique this! ...soon. Watch this spot.

Hi bludragon, A bridge of colors hangs motionless in the sky. Rays of color play across the sidewalk, still wet from the storm that just passed. The collision and incompetence ...

Hi twilightgirl, This doesn't say anything. Basically, what it does illustrate is that you have a bare, basic concept of what a friend is - something that the reader already ...

Hi silversunlightx, Shivers roll down my arms Like an avalanche It almost hurts This reaction Bad transition from one extreme to another. It would make sense if one was parodying ...

Hi ashleylee, Droplets of dew fall freely Time has stopped racing Together we stand You and Me We You say you were going for powerful images but what I see ...

Hi Selin, A little girl, Standing curious and quiet. Looks nervous but, Confident and patient. So she's curious, quiet, nervous, confident, and patient. What do these words have in common? ...