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Re: Forgive my Absence
Hi KnightlyAngel09, Did you think for a moment That my heart had grown legs And gained the ability to Walk away from you? This all looks like fluff so far. ...
Aug 26, 2009 - Re: Electric Heaven Aug 23, 2009
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Re: A poem duh
Quietly and patiently I wait my demise Untouched by humans but killed by the world Why are you untouched by humans? Explain this, including the distinction between humanity and the ...
Aug 17, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Me watching chat yesterday.
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Replay
Hi angels-symphony, I'm running around in circles, it's getting me nowhere. The soles of my shoes are wearing away, the rock beneath them eroding. Frozen in time by indecision, it's ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Yellow
Hi Kylan, the night is full of snails tread carefully – the night is full of snails hobble-backed aborrances, making their slow pilgrimage, on the shoulders of the grassblades small ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: thunderstorm
Hi Juniper, The problem that afflicts most of your poetry that I've read makes this one suffer as well. And that problem is you go on and on and on ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: A peom for the legends
Hi burgs, Come on now. You have to realize how preachy, narrow-minded, and nauseating this sounds as a whole. Actors come and actors go, but only the greats live on. ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: 19 bodies and a bag of oranges
Hi Kylan, I'm disappointed with this piece. An impatient fly tapped against the glass of the door and the old fan spun, struggling against the heat, like a swimmer against ...
Jul 29, 2009 - Re: Hello everyone! Jul 25, 2009
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Re: Chapter 1 ....of a unnamed story x_x
Hi Zoya, Princess Sidra is what I prefer people call me. Elves love to say I’m a very beautiful elf I’m tall and slender with very fair skin, and very ...
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: the pacifier
Hi BigBadBear, tip-toeing at midnight in the darkness, the child stepped on every creaking floorboard, opened every rust door hinge, bumped into every scraping chair. This is about as boring ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: Lynn's Little Crit Shop
Poem: Thank you.
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: The Consequences of Betrayal
Hi paperdollx, These betraying fingers, They trace around your heart, And make you fall in love, With a person, I don't want to be. Not only is this first part ...
Jul 20, 2009 -
Re: "For what are we if not defined by words?" || CLOSED!
Name: Sol Invictus on Trial Genre: Poetry? Oh wait, Dramatic Poetry. Link: Thanks. Don't eat me.
Jul 19, 2009
