Galerius

Why are you all critiquing a work from July?

Hi Kamas, I am inundated with the seasonal enemy Bacteria and thinking while fighting a war is not a thing anybody is able to do, least of all the politicians ...

Hi Zenjoy, I'm trying to decide whether this is brilliant or terrible. Currently, it's a mix of both and while it smells like fresh wood and scents of silk, it ...

Their numero uno entry, ranked highest out of all the other works and followed by three very long pages of praise from fans: Honest. Vivid. Real. Alex is a sixteen ...

Hi Evi, Hahahahahahaha. Don't have time for a real critique right this moment, but watch this space. Hope that helped, Galerius

Hi Kyllorac, A quick little poem prompted by a random word generator since I haven't written any poetry in a while. And this product is exactly the reason why writing ...

Hi Jon, Well, this poem was dead on arrival and barely sputtered out something coherent in the last stanza before falling back to its endless sleep. ~ It's like running ...

What I'm proposing is a compromise of sorts -- the Greeters and Instructor groups be nixed, but a new group with a different color (I'm thinking bright orange would be ...

It's not the usergroup, but the group. Purples and blues are seen as more because they have colored names. Their colors, whether they intend it or not, are a sign ...

Reyu, your first suggestion (promotion) will never be implemented and your second suggestion (shift from colors to icons) is what the administration already plans to do. As to the general ...

Hi silented1, First point of order is to take out all of those ellipses. If you want a pause - or really any kind of deviation from standard reading - ...

Hi iQuippie, This piece suffers from a sliding hill upon which it clings desperately with dirty nails, trying to ascend liquid mud that once used to make up the composition ...

Hi wonderingkate, Everything about this reeks of cliche and Valley-Girl-private-notebook fantasy. "I'm sorry that I wasn't good enough"? How many times has the reader heard that before? A hundred? A ...

Anyway, it was funny... we were meeting a YWS member who was atheist. We spent the whole day with him in San Francisco... it was fabulous! But toward dinner time, ...