Galerius

The poem was titled "lenin, lenin", two out of the three parts seemingly concentrate fully on peasant suffering and rebellion, the remaining part is devoted to the relationship between Rasputin ...

Then don't respond. ------------ Hi Kylan, What's with you not incorporating and building upon one theme? Yes, Russian Revolution, circa 1917, okay. Oh, and the illustration of the red Communist ...

Hi Jennafina, The dancer stumbles out the back door and into the alleyway. He leans against it, and as it closes the sounds of music and voices backstage die away. ...

And I think you missed my point almost everywhere! Thanks for playing, though.

Watch this space (a post to remind myself to review this).

Hi Beautiful Doom, Imagery is your main problem. Storyline and plot is also skewed but the magnitude of the lack of description, and what I call pseudo-description, overshadows all other ...

Hi Kamas, The first explosive impact sets off a ricochet of charges through willowy tissues, taunt with spiteful, precise needles threading themselves from the cusps to the core, that shudders ...

Hi AquaMarine, Go ahead, rip it to shreds. I'll be happy to slink back to Other Fiction. Yeah, mos def, girl. Degrade yourself before the poem starts! That's the way ...

Hi OverEasy, Ridiculous. I don't care if this was a true story or not or whatever. The non-fiction piece is incredibly naive and uninteresting and goes downhill from the first ...

Yes.

Yeah, you can have 500 points. Which reminds me, 1000 points up for grabs.

Hi Audy, R oun d and r oun d, Why the odd italicizing? The only reason I can possibly think of is that perhaps it is intended to demonstrate a ...

Does that mean more to you than practicality and common sense?