Galerius

Hi Evi, I should say in the beginning that even though this is obviously a personal poem, I will not soften my review. Just wanted to throw that out there ...

Hi BenFranks, This piece was repetitive and generally well below mediocre. The imagery throughout is on par, although nothing stands out as really catching the reader's eye; unfortunately, it doesn't ...

Hi ohsorocknroll, Delete this immediately, and don't post an old, useless poem again. Nobody likes to waste their time on something which the author has admitted he will never revise ...

Hi silented1, One thing that I have liked about your poems on your blog is the raw, kind of bleeding intensity that they portray - unbridled emotion, a fast pace. ...

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Hi ofir, The fact that this haphazardly strewn caricature made it onto featured pages is another sign of how most cannot be trusted to identify good literature. This is not. ...

Hi HelpfulMcHelpfulpants, ... and this is the reason why deliberately attempting to rhyme every last word of every line doesn't work when it takes precedence over the poem itself. This ...

Hold on there, cowboy. I still haven't even managed to get to your first one yet...

Kekeke, I shall critique this. Watch this space.

Hi MissSaraElizabeth, If we take out the line breaks, we're left with this: I am playing a game that you made for me. It is long and strenuous,but there is ...

Hi FazoliMoli123, FlyerS is telling you not to write a love poem because as demonstrated here, most of those written by people who can't do it right fail miserably. This ...

Hi antimelrose, Not bad. And yet... I don't know why this is happening, but for some reason, there's a new fad on YWS in which poets attempt to stuff as ...

Hi Conrad Rice, I am appalled. For one who ventured into serious poetry only a few months ago (as according to your own admission), your work has thus far been ...

Hi Rosey Unicorn, I don't know where to begin. Every part of this poem is either pretentious or undercooked, resulting in a blend of both that ails the appetite. Resting ...