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Hi Kaywiia, Somehow, you managed the extraordinary task of saying absolutely nothing while managing to wax on for over fifteen lines of material. This weepy tale is just a waste ...

retelling of my poem above - by Persephoneia There is nakedness in death and dying. This is what I told her the day I showed her to play. Shoulder to ...

Late to the party, I know, but I should respond to those who took the time to reply to me. Snoink: Ever heard of the Overton window? It's a concept ...

This is kind of related to the topic. There is a dilemma that has been eating away at my understanding of modern Christianity. Let us assume that all forms of ...

Poetry dies every five and a half years. And don't talk about the lamentable ignorance of the current Poet Laureate's name. Most official titles and their factory literature today can't ...

Hi peanut19, I haven't read the previous chapters (and I hope I wasn't expected to) but will make do with the failings and shortcomings I can spot from reading this ...

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Hi StoryWeaver13, You're attempting to scribble letters in the air out of a haze of smoke. Stop scribbling letters in the air out of a haze of smoke. So you ...

Hi kjr5horses, They say half the battle is knowing, and it looks like you're right in that this poem isn't any good. But love is not that,It goes on, Much ...

Hi tigertiger, This is barely a poem, limping along painfully by grabbing every single pseud-image and edge it can possibly get its hands on. Lightning, destruction, fire, lake, time, trucks. ...

Hi HelloKitty87, It will be a blessing if any intelligent reader retains interest after the second line of this lumbering behemoth. All you're doing is bellyaching about a girl who ...

Hi SakuraFallsSweetly, This is a blind half-dead salmon traveling through a one-dimensional world. Yes, your poem is on a piece of paper and flows one way but you seem to ...

I was thinking so hard about how much I luvvvezzzz YWS that I didn't notice somebody drawing on me.

I'd like to start a debate over whether we should be celebrating the fact that Osama bin Laden is dead. I'm here to ask you to please stop celebrating. It's ...

Gryphon, Stella, Kitty ->> Honestly, does it really matter? Give it a rest. Brush up on your grammar. It should be: Gryphon / Stella / Kitty ->> Honestly/, does it ...