Galerius

... Navita, stop reviewing, start looking at dates that pieces were posted, and then thank me for saving you from more embarrassment.

Hi silented1, Others may have mentioned this, or not, but the eye with which the reader views the settings and and story changes abruptly, without any fluidity. You talk about ...

Well played, sir.

Hi Lydia1995, None of this makes any sense, and the reader is left wondering whether you actually used your mind to write this poem or whether you wrote down vague ...

Shaved my head last week.

Hi Hannah, I really hope that picture you put before the poetry is for a contest or something, because I'm pretty horrified by this new trend I've seen of people ...

A reminder for me to review this today.

Hi Kamas, Forgive me if you detect that this review is sub-par in any way, for I am writing this while being forced to listen to the cacophony of the ...

Hi yuprincess, This falls apart at the very beginning. I'm not sure what you did to this for three days, but apparently many more days of improvement will be needed ...

Hi TenYo, This is about the most uninterestingly optimistic thing I've ever had to read. Yes, happy poems can be as powerful and deep as any others, but frolicking through ...

Hi Kevothewriter, Have you ever heard of Chinese water torture? As I've heard it, the victim is placed in a position where droplets of water drip onto his forehead, one ...

Hi ScarlettFire, This is a bunch of fluff stuffed with cotton so it looks like your child is well-fed even though it's been starving and crying for some actual food ...

Revive my faith that there is still solid writing going on here. You're in for an unpleasant surprise.

Hi Thegirlwholived, This piece of jumbled linear cliche and half-submerged nostalgic emotion fails on every level. There is literally nothing in here to like or want to keep, both for ...