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Hi ziggiefred, [i]I wrote this poem because I was feeling betrayed by everyone around me (I'm fine now :D ). It basically talks about my idea of a 'home' from ...

Time to wade into this mudhole. Before I begin, I have to say that absolutely nobody on this thread knows how to conduct a proper debate or engage in one. ...

Hi Confused.pirate, Yeah, this is bad. The introduction wasn't needed; it's obvious to anyone with a cerebrum that you wrote it without paying the words much thought or care. It's ...

Hi antimelrose, Apologies for the late review. I have been bogged down in other affairs for the last few days. Now: This is disjointed. Overusing metaphors is only making you ...

There once was a caddy named Paddy; as a laddy he adored confetti. Once he was with his BFFL and they both fell off a cliff(le) and that was the ...

Hi Navita, I'm not sure what Kylan's seeing, but this poem is basically a decorated corpse. It's smiling with face paint and you can move its flimsy arms around, sure, ...

Hi PenguinAttack, First things first. This immediately put me off because of the fact that you use too much... pseudoimagery, as I call it. You describe a term, place, or ...

Anybody who's eaten a Whopper (even sans cheese) has no right to complain. Oh well.

Hi spike71294, She vents out her feelings by dancing and by the end she is reformed, kinda like a new birth for her. The phoenix was a metaphor! Gosh people ...

Hi LastPaladin, Winnie603 is absolutely correct. This plays out like a story but without all of the benefits of pure prose. You take sentences and break them in half every ...

Hi papersolstice, I am shocked that this sorry thing got five stars and is featured. Of course, is not your fault, but do know that apparently the reflections of most ...

Since some were worried that changing the location of one link to one inch to the right somehow made it less important, I have bolded that one link. Much appreciated.

Hi praisejoe, So what's the celestial task? All you do is ramble on about a vague feeling and leave it at that. And don't get me wrong - it can ...

This is a poem I wrote on the spot. I hope you guys like it! Quick hint. When you write a poem "on the spot", chances are you haven't invested ...

Yes, I suppose that "Read/Write" isn't important enough to deserve a spot in a noticeable place.