Galerius

Hi Kyllorac, The beginning few lines are okay, and the rest send this poem to hell in a handbasket. Other reviewers have mentioned flaws that I agree with, but I'm ...

boobaah

Hi Kaitelyn Miller, What amandajo said, albeit with competent grammar. This may have some kind of imagery and descriptive quality to it (read: basic stuff like comparing something to ribbons, ...

Hi retrodisco666, After reading the first two lines, I actually thought that this was going to be a decent poem. I quickly realized how wrong I was. Your two main ...

Hi AmberAngst, When I look through the cookie rack at my workplace's cafe, there are biscuits that are fresh and doughy and ones that you can immediately point out as ...

Prokaryote is kool, Prokaryote is kewl, Prokaryote makes me drool drool drool!!!

Don't bump threads more than two months old, especially when you have nothing more to say than "I like this". And unlike Prokaryote's thread, I can actually close this one, ...

Fine, here's your critique.

Rule of thumb: Don't bump up works that are more than two months old - and especially not if the only comment you have is "This is great".

Hi Kamas, I already know what you're doing right, and you already know what you're doing right, so let's get down to the finer points of what makes this poem ...

Hi Way2Dawn, Listen to brainychic212. Usually, I hardly comment on punctuation within poems because it is the least important quality of a work, but here things are different. As she ...

And none for Gretchen Weiners, bye.

Going through a rough few weeks, but I'll be better soon.

Hi Lava, I expect you to lose that contest, because this isn't good writing. This story seemed like it was so hastily formed that not only did you forgo any ...

Hi Kamas, An anthrogram of good luck charms you searched for carried in a Bible matchbox. In your threaded pockets, with the penny that you found. But good luck hasn't ...