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Re: Sip and Stone
My second song to be submitted. Has a more upbeat tone then my last song, even though it has about drugs. One day I take a little sip And drunk ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Lies
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I guess the chorus is kinda out of place. If I'm gonna base a chorus after one i was listening to, I probably should have ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Lies
I started typing this song while repeatedly listening to the S&M version of One by Metallica opening. Then I turned to Cyanide(the song) for a chorus. I'm tired of all ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Destination California - Chapter 1
Nice job! I yet to read the complete thing, but good job. I dislike the cliffhanger, but that technically is how all stories go, I guess... anyway, great description. Two ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fanfiction: The Wedding
That was great. You should of written the wedding in Breaking Dawn. Great description.
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: The Sims and You
LOL. That was just... awesome. It totally describes the annoyance of Sims. You have to control every single aspect of their life, because they can't move two steps without you ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
OMG. LOLLOLLOOLOLOL. This takes LOL to a whole new level. ROTFLOLOOB (Roll on the floor laughing out loud out of breath)
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Abortion
Wow. Great job. It is both deep and dealing with a serious issue. Plus, it can teach you about abortion(rather you want to or not.)
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Hey!
Hey. Name's Gale. Real name's Matthew. I like Twilight(I'm on Eclipse)Charlie Bone(Book Six)Harry Potter(completed)and manga. I can't wait to meet people and write stories.
Feb 6, 2009
