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  • Lyrics Re: Sin

    Good job. It shows a scary theme, yet the scariest thing is not the murderer. The only problems that I found were that it was pretty short, and seemed a ...

    Sep 19, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Whatever it Takes

    Ever since I saw you I can't look away Growing closer to you every passing day So many words I want to say But do you feel the same way? ...

    Aug 11, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Try Again

    Just a day in the life Another day of strife Every fights just another war Just another time Another day of crime Every fights just like befo-ohohore I'm not a ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Scripts Re: The Life Of A Writer

    Well, that was interesting. Another reason why we all need a show on the Animal Channel. It certainly was funny, and random. And twilight haters will love it (if you ...

    May 19, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: It is ten of evening on the city clock

    First of all, welcome to YWS, Black Rain! This was a very good first entry. The first two verses were not very good at rhyming, but still laid down the ...

    May 11, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Fade Away

    -calm guitar playing, then silence- Without you, my sun goes out The deathly silence takes my shouts Took away by Father Time What did I do to deserve this crime? ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Through Everything

    It's a pretty good romance song. Sounds like things you'd say to a real girlfriend, and maybe she'd love you back. Aside for some problems with rhyming, it was a ...

    Apr 11, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: My Cell is My Shell

    I was listening to St. Anger when the lyrics came into my mind. Trapped always behind my bars Forced to gain the brand new scars Hate seeing into my mirror ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Freestyle. Origional. Mine Only.

    The rhymes are the best thing I can say. See, there are a couple of things you did wrong. Now, one major thing is that you need to have posted ...

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Happy

    OMG. That's like a cartoon, with the super cute and nice girl/guy/animal/monster going all evil. And it makes fun of how everything else on this board has dark meaning(but then, ...

    Feb 19, 2009
  • Archive Re: Candles on the Water

    Any kids left?

    Feb 16, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer

    LOL. Just, LOL. I mean, you made me laugh so many times in this it was like reading... well... a funny Twilight parody. Not implying, but Paws will be the ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Archive Re: Battle Of The Bands

    Name: Link Abanki Age: 15(finished school early) Apperance: Idol: Axl Rose and Steve Tyler Axl: Steve: Favourite Band/s: Linkin Park, Guns N Roses, Aerosmith, Metallica, Favourite type of music: Rock,

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Archive Re: Zodiac

    What zodiacs are left?

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Sip and Stone

    Erm... what?

    Feb 9, 2009


I am proud of my self, the reason why some of you might disagree with me a little with, but nevertheless I still proud.
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