Gahks

I once went to a hotel, and the room service was so bad that when I asked for a hot chocolate all they gave me was a Cadbury's Flake and ...

Yeah, this poem needs less cliche and more originality. What was it really like without your sister? A ghost of a presence, maybe? An echo that you couldn't quite hear? ...

Law & Order. All the way.

Can poetry really be structured like that? I liked your repetition to begin with but it seemed overdone and artificial by the end. I like to use the rule of ...

It really depends. Mostly word processor on PC, but if I'm out of options, longhand in pen.

Maze

1. Rejecting everything humanity stands for. 2. Rape 3. Murder or Abuse (physical, sexual etc.) 4. Never thought about it.

Empty Summer It should never have happened. In the waning days of that dreadfully sticky summer, Roger slithered about on his sofa like an outstretched sloth, gazing dreamily at the ...

Welcome, fellow newbie!

This poem was an enjoyable read, but as other reviewers have said, it does need to keep within the rhyme scheme. The omission of the article in the last line ...

You are honoured in being my first reviewee! You clearly show us, the reader, the despair the narrator has at not sensing anything from the relationship. I really like your ...

Hi all, I'm Gahks (that's 'garks', not my real name of course), I'm 15 going on 16 and I live in the South of England. I am British Born Chinese, ...