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Hey, Sureal, from a fellow Brit! Welcome! :D What sort of genres are you into? And all this lucid dreaming stuff sounds fascinating - can you explain to me how ...

Sometimes I'll do it if I've hit a wall - thinking through the characters can trigger off new things that might add to the plot.

It's not that the lines are wrong but you've just chosen the wrong word. E.g. "postpone" in "I postpone the hour to dream" sounds forced and artificial. Similarly, "shocked" in ...

I liked the way the title forms the first line of the poem. But the things you describe are really quite shocking! The last verse, as other reviewers have said, ...

Writing is meant to be FUN! So have fun with it!

This is a story that's very personal to me - it's based on my own experiences. Enjoy. Terminal The figure strode excitedly that morning towards that place, intent on issuing ...

This is a great start! However, I feel that there are some things which, if corrected, would help enormously. Firstly, try to cut out all your adjectives. Only use the ...

Conflict is drama. A story cannot exist without a problem, a conflict, a puzzle that must be resolved.

I have completed my LAMDA Bronze Medal in Public Speaking and am currently studying for the Silver Medal. I haven't done much in the way of debating but do enjoy ...

This piece suffers from a lack of narrative data and too many taglines - she said this, he shouted that etc. These only add dead weight and dulls the flow ...

The question says it all. Do you think L&O will really beat Gunsmoke? Have the new cast members helped? Will SVU and CI last as long? As a British viewer ...

I like thrillers mostly, but I also like a good drama, like "Atonement." That sort of powerful and evocative film.

How do you get inspiration for your writing? You can share your thoughts and tips here. Most of my stories start with a "What if...?" situation. Ordinary people doing unordinary ...

I don't outline very much. I have a rough mental idea of where the story's going to go and let it grow, evolve and change organically. But different people work ...

Has some great inspirations for a writer who needs them desperately.