Gahks

After Suzanne's comments, I decided to revamp "Sixteen" and came up with a brand new poem: "Kaleidoscope." Kaleidoscope For my family and friends. Another hurdle conquered, another chasm crossed; anot

I thought I'd acknowledge my birthday slightly differently this year. I've written two poems to celebrate my Chineseness (if there is such a word!) and me being sixteen. The Tank ...

A big HELLO to RIP, evanrith, Window, Johnny, pockylover24 and all other new newbies! Welcome from cloudy England! Hope you enjoy our company. Feel free to PM me if anything's ...

No, sorry. But hi, anyway. Welcome from cloudy England! Hope you enjoy our company. See you around! Gahks :D

At the moment I am about 40% of the way into writing my crime thriller, "Tabula Rasa." I am looking to stage it in a month or two, when I ...

Hey there, This shows promise. Couple of things: 1) Don't start with a passive. In fact, limit the use of the passive voice as much as possible. Instead of: "The ...

Don't be so self-deprecating, adnamarine! It's a fine story with a wonderful concept. The main problem with this is that there's too much telling. You use a lot of 'was/were' ...

This has somewhat disappeared from the news lately. I guess news is old once you hear of it. I am slightly suspicious of the parents but to be honest, why ...

*applause for Stella Thomas* "It is easier to denounce the evildoer than to understand him." - Dostoyevsky. Executing killers does not make them any better citizens. It simply treats them ...

I think that we need to keep our options open to avoid the horror of backstreet abortions. Just look what's happened in Nicaragua, where the government has banned abortion. Many ...

Hey there from England! Welcome to YWS! Hope you have fun here. Look forward to seeing some of your work. Catch you later, Gahks (pronounced 'garks') :D

Ooh... interesting. Couple of things: 1) Is this one of those periodical things that comes out weekly, monthly, annually, every Chinese New Year etc.? If so, how do you submit ...

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Hey there, Welcome back! What happened sounds really odd... anyway, hope things are better now. Onwards and upwards, as they say! See you around, Gahks :D

The Human Bullet The young man sat there and stared at the pristine blue sky, clutching his gas mask. He could smell the salty sea air, hear the squawk of ...