Gahks

Hope that what I'm seeing is just some sick fantasy in my head. What would you do if someone killed your closest friend?

Sounds cynical and somewhat hopeful, which is probably the intended tone. Past Imperfect

In Spanish?! Aren't you limiting your audience somewhat? 3/10 - Some good character ideas, but lacks plot and substance. However, I have to say the setting is original. Not as ...

Why bother asking?

As my English teacher used to say, "It's like knowing how to ride a bike before you do a wheelie." Or, a screenwriter puts it, "There are no rules, but ...

Wow. Extremely poignant. Your description is elegant and deeply moving. To improve it, I think you could improve your lineation: "Is it not beautiful? I am as a lover that ...

Agreed. If everyone is willing and has consented to participate, then what is the problem? I don't think polyamory is as widely known as polygamy; is this so?

Ten pounds sterling - do you want that in dollars, or what?

Where did you get all the smileys from, Thunder? Stop freaking me out. Let's PARTY!!

Hey Jesse from England! Welcome to YWS! My name's Gahks (that's pronounced 'garks'). I saw your thread had no replies so I thought I'd be first to do so. Pleased ...

Hi Vally! Glad you could join in the fun! I'm Gahks (that's pronounced 'garks'). Fantasy and realistic animal? Not many crime writers around here, sadly... alas. Never mind - hope ...

Can't you figure that out for yourself?

Strangers’ Meeting It’s funny how Fate works in unfathomable ways. Just a few days ago I met a man whose path I’d fallen into the day before. He was checking ...

That Night I have not come to the lake to confess my sins. For that night was the first and the only time we would ever be full of joy. ...

In my opinion, we should celebrate the diversity of humanity, and that includes the many permutations of sex and sexuality; that includes bisexuality. I don't like people being defined simply ...