Gahks

I love 'Birdsong'! Haven't read 'Human Traces' yet; is it worth considering?

(Not sure where to put this; please move if needs be.) As you may be aware, I started writing a play called "Tabula Rasa" (now called "Submission"); I've stopped continuing ...

Agree, Eimear: Don't constrain yourself by having to stick to a rhyme scheme or a metre. This is why I tend to write in blank verse, not rhyming verse. Just ...

REPLIES TO QUESTIONS 1. How many children in your family? Just me 2. How old is each child? Sixteen 3. Are your parents divorced? Yes 4. If yes to question ...

Can't you decide for me?

Definitely science-fiction or post-apocalypse thriller. Good title! A Conspiracy of One

Prose? You mean in general or just speeches. If you want general prose for a stimulus, try Atonement by Ian McEwan. It's an excellent novel. Or, for speeches, I suggest ...

Hi Squishy! Welcome! I'm Gahks (pronounced 'garks'); good to meet you!

Hey there! Welcome to YWS from England! I'm Gahks (that's pronounced 'garks'). Glad to meet you. Do you have any hobbies or interests? What do you like to read/write most? ...

*laughs* Hey Lorraine, nai ho from a fellow Chinese person (albeit a British born and bred one, mind). Dai ga ho! What sort of stuff do you like to read/write? ...

Yes, I agree, it is a bit lengthy. This definitely has potential. However, the one thing it lacks is SHOWING. At the moment, you're telling us far too much of ...

Interesting interpretation; hadn't thought of that! Thank you!

Yes, you can be relieved. Evolution concerns biological processes and not physical or astronomical, for that matter. :wink:

Waking to silence, the dim light cascading over my room, casting a flickering shadow of feathery clouds You use too many present participles; make them active verbs. I tiptoe down, ...

Lake How many times did we both sit and stare out to space, wonder at the myriad secrets the water might conceal here? How many times did we both strip ...