Gahks

Sign Language Our heat melts words Into silence undulating on the wind. You trace your finger across my body, Inscribing messages the gods shall never know, Your face lit by ...

Island Tide Evening wraps us in midsummer mist As it rolls into the shore from beneath placid waters, The sun still drawing its last fiery breath. Your face lies there, ...

I like Perforated and Snoink's ideas. Maybe identify her by her physical characteristics, e.g. "The Brown Eyed Girl" (a small debt owed to Van Morrison!)? What do you reckon?

Having outbreaks like these are proof enough that our governments at the least are lazy, and perhaps just don't give a flying crap about the people they're meant to be ...

Hey there! Some of the imagery is great, but the fact that you have restricted yourself to two quatrains limits the sheer potential of this poem. I can see some ...

Bonjour! I believe 'tis a great poem. You have handled your subject matter well and, as Eimear says, have expressed some deep truths; this is the kind of poetry that ...

There's already a thread for this in the Debate Group. Why not join? :)

I am concerned but I'm not alarmed. The threat to most of us is highly insignificant, but preparation is key. Who knows, the virus might return more viciously a couple ...

Disgusting. Absolutely disgusting. Our (Britain's, I am a Brit) society should be ashamed. RIP Shaun. You didn't deserve this.

(This might be better in Writing Tips?)

Who didn't cross the road? The fairy hippos of Mars

It seems like some kind of philosophical novel like Life of Pi . The Kindness of Strangers

What?! No, I don't mate, sorry. *points at aliens leering suspiciously over there*

If and when you do decide to use tags, make sure they don't intrude into the scene. Trying too hard and coming out with things like "he averred" sounds pretentious ...

I think you mean argument and not debate, lukas8u. Just a small semantic matter! But anyway, I'll stick my thoughts in. I think it's absolutely insane Bush managed to get ...