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Re: 'Earth's resources are there to be used, not conserved'
Discuss this statement! I would be particularly interested to hear opinions from China, which is currently facing a huge environmental crisis. In National Geographic magazine, it was recently claimed
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Women's pants
I take it you mean trousers...? (This is a Brit speaking, by the way.) I don't have any real opinion on this, but I do agree with Griffinkeeper and Nate ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Fast Lane
Hey there: this review arrives as requested! The last two sentences were definitely the best part. That section has a wonderful short, sharp quality to it; I love those kinds ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Things Seen In Cab-Ride #276
As requested! You really broke ground in this poem: I must praise you for being so challenging. You used poetic devices to extremely good effect, such as the anaphora in ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Anyone seen the Indiana Jones movie 'The crystal skulls'
Let's just enjoy it for what it is: a good piece of popcorn. All the main cast members played their roles very well - Cate Blanchett in particular was deliciously ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Endless Time Stops
Yeah, punctuation could really give the reader a helping hand with this one. I get the lineation! It's a physical manifestation of time as the lines shorten to one word ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Propaganda
The real problem with propaganda is not the advertising itself, it's the fact that it can dupe people into something without having made a clear, considered decision first.
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Useless Verse
Unfortunately, I didn't get it either. I read this expecting some powerful metapoetry, which is what you advertised this as. (Metapoetry is poetry about poetry.) Instead, all I got was ...
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Home
Hey there! Is this your first poem? I haven't seen you around before... welcome if so! If not, hello! As previous reviewers have commented, it lacks flow. You could also ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Fragments
yeah... it's somehow messed up... will try and fix.
May 27, 2008 -
Re: To the Sea
Wow! An excellent poem. I adored your use of imagery (especially your use of apostrophe: that was a stroke of genius). Your style shares something of Wordsworth. Your rhythm was ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: An ode to those who dream
Hey Eimear! This was an interesting little poem. Your rhetorical question was a clever way to begin and your images really stood out, but the problem was there were too ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Love...
This might be ages late but I thought I'd review it anyway. I love the use of anaphora. Some people may see it as mindless repetition, but in my opinion ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: My Writing Depresses Me
Yes: visual dialogue! If you watch films or TV shows, you'll notice the conversations are hardly ever static (except in 'arty' films or segues between major incidents). Learn from them! ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: suspense
*laughs* Never mind.
May 27, 2008
