Gahks

'Lo there, Gahks here to review your work! For something you must have written out fairly quickly, this is not a bad start. It definitely shows promise. The beginning is ...

It really doesn't matter what order you write stuff in, just as long as your plot and character details are consistent (e.g. in Chapter Three your protagonist has a purple ...

I'm for December's Burn. It has a ring to it, plus there is symbolic potential in the juxtaposition of December, associated with cold, with the word 'burn,' from the language ...

Hi there! I saw your poem had no reviews, so I'll be the first to post one! No one has a problem with venting your feelings out in poetry. In ...

My mother once told me that the wind was the voice of the world But if there is no wind Does the world have nothing to say Or has it ...

This poem has been taken down as a new version now appears in yours truly's anthology, "Public Spaces, Private Reflections." If you would like a copy, please contact me!

There is speculation the European Union will develop into a state-like organisation called the United States of Europe. While I doubt such a move is likely right now, the EU ...

Hey there! First impressions: I'm dead confused. You said the first few lines were ironic, so what does that mean? That they don't have a consistent message? Are they deliberately ...

Hey there! Like some of the other reviewers, I found the rhyme pattern inconsistent. While this can be easily rectified, there are more fundamental issues that need to be dealt ...

Hi there! Great stuff. You seem to know a lot about the emo culture, and your personal experiences are clearly reflected in the speaker, so I can really identify with ...

Hi there! Welcome! Of course, please write a novel so we can all read it! After all, that's what YWS is about. But proper English grammar and punctuation is a ...

All the Law & Order series. Plus ER. I got into it quite recently!

Discuss the above statement! Can war be justified if it is in the name of democracy? Is war ever justified?

A decent prologue is something that intrigues, raises questions and never reveals too much. It doesn't have to be out and out grab-you-by-the-throat excitement. A sense of mystery, atmosphere and ...

Hilarious!