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Re: atlantis
Apparently, Hitler believed that Atlanteans were purest possible peoples: the Aryans, as they were dubbed. He tried to replicate that and so began the Holocaust. I cannot remember the source ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Odd little idea...
Agree with Tyd on this one; sounds like a neo-noir sci-fi, much like Heroes . Good luck with writing it!
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Hey All!
Hey there Ankit from England! Welcome to YWS! I'm Gahks (that's pronounced 'garks'); glad you could join us! As your username and introductory post suggest, you must be a keen ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: When the protagonist is also the antagonist?
Yeah, that is the only case possible. E.g. Dr Jekyll/Mr Hyde. Such characters are extremely rare as Robert L. Stevenson broke the mould anyway. However, it is more often the ...
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Re: In the Silent Valley
Hey Eimear! I liked the way you went back to the older phrasings with this. As you say, you took inspiration from another poem and obviously you wanted to recall ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Hit and Run
Hey Suzanne! This was excellent stuff and I praise your originality for showing us the ultimate act in a different light. I had not seen some of the double meanings ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Lead Character Could Use Some More Meat
Hey Theo! Haven't seen you here before... welcome! I'm Gahks (pronounced 'garks'); pleased to meet you! Try my character questionnaire - just click the link below:
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Splinters
Splinters Shattered into splinters, the shards of my heart shine in the moonlight. I stare into one, scrabbling in futility for a fragment of the chain of honesty that bound ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Open Again!
Anything from my portfolio. Just anything. Please. Thanks. Gahks
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Hello
Hey Blink from a fellow Brit! Welcome to YWS! I'm Gahks - that's pronounced 'garks', good to meet you. *handshake* I see you're a fantasy writer; I prefer crime myself, ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Publishing Poetry
Get your name out in the whole wide world. Sadly, poetry is a dying market and you must get your voice heard above the others. Enter as many competitions as ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
A twist on "Death Becomes Her", perhaps, so a romantic comedy in that sense. Or alternatively, a terrifying thriller in which the protagonist refuses to believe the revelations that she ...
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: Beautiful Dreamer (please leave a comment)
Hey there! I like your username BTW - words are powerful and this is the year to celebrate them! Firstly, you used way too many passives. As you may know, ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: A Road Without End
Hey Ringo! I've been meaning to review your poetry for a while and haven't done so yet... well, here's my chance! This was unbelievably good; a near classic. If only ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Yet another hello
Hey Max! Long time no see! And hello Kakburken! Haven't had a Swede on here for a while - well, you're the first I've encountered. (I'm British Chinese, BTW.) Good ...
Jul 11, 2008
