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Re: London Dreams
London Dreams She has collapsed into the dark night, my own Lady Diana. I stare at her cascading complexion, caressing the features that her mother carved like a Michelangelo masterpiece. ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Poem I wrote when I was 12...
Hey there! Well, you have some very original ideas. However, there are (as always) a couple of things that we can easily iron out. Firstly, this poem was way too ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Electricity Storm
Hey Eimear! Your images are wonderful in this poem and you have some really interesting ideas, but at the moment they seem like a list, as other reviewers have pointed ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Are people really equal?
I think 'equality' as a construct (see Rubric's argument) is an ideal that we all aspire to but in practice it never holds universally true. We have to accept that ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: Cloning, should it be allowed?
I don't have any problem with it if extremely tight safeguards are imposed so that such technology does not fall into the wrong hands. Should that happen, who knows what ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: The Lisbon Treaty -a European debate
Agreed, idle_muse. I hate the treaty as it gives away most of our powers to Brussels and for the reasons you mentioned. Many people like myself want a referendum. The ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: How do Mountains Effect Weather?
This is known as relief or orographic rainfall.
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Questions Only
Are you sure he didn't mention it out of sheer boredom?
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Before we start, we must wait one hundred minutes before you can read on. Now wait another hundred minutes. And another hundred. And another...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Stupid Creative Writing Assignment--NEED TIPS!!!
Tip 1: Get yourself an ideas box. Anythign vaguely interesting - an anecdote, something you overhear, a news story - can go in it. When you've got an ideas drought, ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: Endings
Look over your entire storyline again, see if you can find something that can set off your ending. Your conclusion is what your story has been working up to: knock ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: "Religion causes too many problems."
I felt like being controversial with this one, so... fire away!
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Wall-E
Haven't seen it yet. But it looks cute.
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: New person over here
Hey Paige from England! Welcome to YWS! I'm Gahks (that's pronounced 'garks'); pleased to meet you! Well done for getting a prize for your writing; I've entered for a couple ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Agents
Get The Writers' and Artists' Yearbook. It's mostly written for British authors, but if you are foreign, you may well find some useful contacts. Any edition is great, but preferably ...
Jul 15, 2008
