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You could pose questions: Why is this character in this place at this time? Who are they going to kill? What is their motivation? (Not literally, of course, but things ...

Yeah, I think it would be very difficult trying to get bin Laden or the Phelps family to join the group! I think it is an excellent idea! I shall ...

Bed

Have a very long shower. What would you do if you found something belonging to a long-lost friend?

Hey there, Firstly, let the poem tell its own story. Don't spoonfeed us your message and meaning!If we as readers feel something is vague, we'll probably let you know. The ...

Hey Jack, Perhaps for the last few lines to make sense, something like: "It is colder now that it has ever been : stale, lukewarm, (I think a colon makes ...

Broken Light The sun’s fingers break the glassy vista that billows skywards and lights her ghostly eyes, as they follow mine with the tenderness of lost years. She haunts the ...

Hey Brad, Yes, I agree with the previous reviewer. Your technical skill is admirable in this poem and you have clearly put a lot of thought into it, but I ...

Hey there, This is a good start. You indeed have treated such an overused subject well. What you now need to do is refine your expression: you need to show ...

I wouldn't be able to do anything! What would you do if a policeman came to your front door to arrest you?

You. Why can't we make time go backwards?

Get Incandescence (Brad) to intervene and inject some anti-APS (assassination psychopathy syndrome) drugs. Yay! What would you do if you could make time stop?

Hi there, For a relatively new writer, the confidence with which you put your feelings on the page is admirable. The few words you use encapsulate express so much, which ...

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