Gahks

Agreed, Raimunda. You have some interesting ideas but they need development. The one or two that are really pertinent to the piece need a lot more room. In fact, the ...

Hey there! This is a good start. You communicated your thoughts well (after a good few reads!) and I thought your lack of punctuation, if deliberate, was a stroke of ...

Hey there! I'm Gahks (that's pronounced 'garks') and I warmly welcome you to this wonderful family! *handshake* What sort of stuff do you write? I'm a crime person myself, but ...

Hey there! Gahks would also like to introduce himself and say hi! He says that his name is pronounced 'garks' (not his real one, of course), and also that he ...

Enjoy our warm and friendly company, Nate! The Gahkmeister.

Hey there, This is unbelievably good. I mean unbelievably. Your expression is simply exquisite, particularly in these phrases: "The sun [is] peeping in through the sliver in the curtains, You ...

I would love a good ghost story! I haven't heard/seen/read that many that really send a shiver down your spine!

As another year draws to a close, I ask, what are your predictions for the world in 2009: political, cultural, technological and economical? Discuss!

Any one of Macbeth, R&J, Othello and (to a lesser extent) Merchant of Venice.

You know you're a writer when you write a poem to get revenge on your literature teacher who insulted you. (I did!)

Dial 999. Get a prescription for some re-enlargement drug. What would you do if there was a blackout in your town?

The playwright Harold Pinter, author of "The Birthday Party," "The Caretaker" (which I studied at GCSE! Brilliant play) and the screenplay of "The French Lieutenant's Woman," died after battling with ...

Hi there, You have some interesting ideas in this poem. I think the curtain image is great, but underdeveloped and only obliquely referenced in the breaking "walls of protection" in ...

Waking

Why not try writing back to front? Or write the beginning and ending first and then the middle? You don't have to write the story in the order it will ...