Gahks

Hello! I'm Gahks and I'll be reviewing your work today. You clearly possess some talent and some of your images are absolutely wonderful: "...the sound of a mouth talking and ...

Chips

"The semi-colon is a gift to any writer." - Dianne Doubtfire. The semi-colon, in the words of the OED, indicates "a discontinuity of grammatical construction greater than a comma but ...

This is a decent attempt at rhyming poetry; well done! Now you could focus on more imaginative imagery and more unusual rhymes that captivate the reader's attention. Describe for us ...

Yeah, agreed Bob: this is AWESOME and deserves more reviews! My poetry is merely a blip in the sky of greatness that this is. I've read through it several times ...

Pronouncing the "h", also known as aspiration, works in both senses. Here in the UK, anyway.

Hmm... possibly...

Yeah, I think fair trials would have been a good idea, but at least closing down the Bay means one less blemish on the American reputation now.

Only bring in backstory if it's relevant to the main plot and adds depth to it. Episodes of Law & Order are a good example.

Cliffhangers are about SUSPENSE. Suspense is key to any successful book. It's also known the "need to know what happens next." As the word might suggest, the conclusion of the ...

You have to plan the deaths carefully, so that you don't lose the reader's interest. A great example of this is Robert Bloch's 1959 suspense novel Psycho , later the ...

It is definitely a good idea to get some screenwriting software. Final Draft is highly recommended and tends to be considered as the industry standard, but it's unbelievably expensive (here ...

Hey Ducati! This is a decent attempt to use the subconscious of dreams as inspiration for poetry. If Freud liked it, what can I say? ;) I think you're restricting ...

Many thanks. Writing to a certain extent is like acting without actually becoming an actor. It allows you to imagine yourself as characters and dramatise situations that you yourself could ...

Yes, but there must be appropriate legal safeguards in place to prevent it becoming "the thin edge of the wedge."