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I thought this poem was really clever, it created a tone of what is to come in life - as you said - a decent wage etc. Your work is ...

This is the only poem in my collection where it rhymes, so be kind when reviewing. :) Oh, and i wrote this a while back so if it's not as ...

A rope, A gun, poison or knife. Whatever was needed to take my life. There was no angel to account for, not even a knighthood boy, to save me from ...

hey, i really liked your poem it's easy to relate to. :) i thought it was really thoughtful and sweet. If you need me to review any more of your ...

Hey, i really liked your poem. It made me hungry. :) Keep it up!

hi, i really liked this poem. I thought you planned it out well and added a lot of detail. Well done! :)

This poem is very cute and i enjoyed reading it. :) I love your profile picture by the way, i too - am a star wars fan.

Hi, to answer your questions the poem is essentially about a woman trapped in a marriage where she does love her husband, he isn't abusive but he is superior to ...

Hi, I really liked this piece because of the description, it really painted a picture and it helped me visualize things like the having very little left of the stomach. ...

Hi, I thought your poem was very deep and meaningful. It was so easy to read but it really interested me and made me want to keep reading. I think ...

I thought this poem was really sweet. :) Well done.

Hi, I really liked your poem because you planned it out so well, i could read it easily and couldn't find a fault. :) Well done.

Hi, I really liked your poem because it had a good use of description, especially when you describe the blood as 'froth' - i thought that was very clever. :) ...

Hi, I really liked your poem but i have one criticism. I'm not sure if you are or aren't intentionally rhyming the lines but in some parts it fits quite ...

It drips, A travelling circus of blood cells and metal. Magnesium and iron. I'm bionic to the bone. It looks so vivid, a liquefied ruby. Just think, how much a ...