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Hey, this is a good piece and it creates a good image such as 'I found you, slumped and dozy in your chair. An aged king, too old to carry ...

Matthew, this song is very beautiful and captures emotion, especially when you talk of 'stormy skies' I could imagne singing it and it works so well as a song rather ...

Matthew, the words you've used are very descriptive and paint a picture - the blood dripping - i think you coiuld perhaps further this for example describing the blood more ...

Hey I liked this poem, based on the fact it is presented almost like spoken language. The description of lips is very good. :) keep it up!

hahahah it reminded me of that too! :) Thanks Matthew.

Thankyou popatemyheart1994 whoever you are. :)

Matthew, This poem is different to your other one but makes the 'ice' reference and you use tis to a good advantage, maybe you should use it as a theme ...

Matthew, This poem is oozing with obvious deep thought. You've taken into consideration a lot of little details, I generally enjoyed reading it and considered what it could be about. ...

Hey, I really liked this poem, it created an image and i felt it was planned out very well. I really like poetry that talks of angles and heavenly images. ...

Hi there. I draw a lot, so i'll give you a hint with your drawing piece that will make it even better. First of all, it's an okay piece and ...

Hello :) I thought this poem was extremely well planned and thought out. It was extremely descriptive and i really enjoyed reading it. Hope this helps - if you need ...

The blood of my children is smeared on my hands. Hera, divine and cruel. You will not rest until my body is frozen, grounded and gone. Until you hear my ...

I forgive you not, Athena. For what you've done to me. An unbearable decay of skin and blood, a walking Gorgan corpse. Feared by all. It was not my fault, ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this poem. The imagery used it very detailed. The one criticism i have is that i think this poem would work better if the poem had ...

well, the 'her' part is meant to represent someone who is aware i'm going to kill myself. It is supposed to be my best friend and even though she is ...