Gabe

scientifically we are primates and so are chimps, but when you look at any animal you will notice that pretty much everything they do is motivated by food, getting a ...

The ballad of tommy tucker Tommy Tucker came on down, Down from Indiana, Until a small town he found, The town of El Bandana, None from Bandana knew who he ...

I think we can use mutations to cure diseases and such but to go any farther than that (which you know they will) would be utterly disastorous. I always say ...

So we read the book Whirligig in school and were asked to write another chapter to the book in which it shows one of the whirligigs affecting somebody in a ...

minerva quote: For another thing, you still give no explanation as to where this eternal god came from. If he has always been there, why did he wait for all ...

If you think that the world was created by a speck exploding and creating living organism, cells, DNA and all the stars and moons as the explosion expands, than go ...

There is a God . . . how did we get here? science gives no realistic answers to this question. (and don't even say big bang) just cut open a ...

cool. i really like. I hope eventually you incorperate this into some bigger story. As was already said I liked the emotion. And the sword fight was brilliant. It made ...

no, sorry. the person below has been out of their country before.

let me guess, you wrote this when we slept over and you were staying up to watch the olympics, right? anyway, it was a great poem. There was a couple ...

Cool. The only part I thought was a little awkward was "Uncontrollable, free As I pray for your safety, Please don't leave me" it didn't flow very nicely and threw ...

Jocelyn . . .Jocelyn . . .Jocelyn you sicken me. Only you would write something so horrid haha

Cool, but I'm still not sure of the the setting. Consider answering questions like: what type of farm is this? what are they doing here? How old is mark and ...

I really like it. The only problem I would have with is that it is really slow moving, espiecially the first paragraph. Being detailed is aprriciated by the reader but ...

this is just a short piece. I just wanted to post something and see what people say about it. Give me some practice. I have done some reasarch in the ...