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Disregard anything I say because you're the author. And also because I'm having conflicting thoughts about this piece. And a lot of this is my opinion. I can't decide whether ...

Hmm I guess I can't help you here. Don't know why it's a classic. Probably because of all the universal themes it touches? It's hard to tell why most classics ...

Brilliant work. I'm a sucker for anything with good description. :) I would love to read something longer of yours and see if you can keep up this beautiful stuff ...

Well, this is dialogue. So obviously it will only be dialogue-related things I discuss today. I'm not an expert at conversation, but I'll do my best to critique you. Disregard ...

Feel free to disregard anything I say. You're the author in the end. :) He came to her door on a bright, crisp, Sunday morning. Pick one of those adjectives ...

Feel free to disregard anything I say. You're the author in the end. :) Okay. I don't want to line by line nitpicks right now, cause I don't feel like ...

Feel free to disregard anything I say. You're the author in the end. I don't really have any nitpicks, and they pretty much got them covered anyway. So I'll just ...

Feel free to disregard anything I say...you are the author. :) She didn’t collect from school. Do you mean "collect me"? Okay. Well I guess that ^^ is the only ...

Hey, daytripper! Yay, you put a short piece in Other Fiction (my dwelling :)). I shall attempt to review, even though I don't have too many suggestions. Disregard anything I ...

Feel free to disregard anything I say! You are the author! I scampered around the square, my wide eyes taking in all of the sights in Disneyland. Because you used ...

Feel free to disregard anything I comment on. You're the author in the end! Outside it is glaringly bright but even with the cloudless sky it is surprisingly cold. Watch ...

Feel free to disregard anything I say--you are the author in the end! :) “Hang on,” I heard myself say. “Just hang on. It’s only a scratch.” Okay, this one ...

I doubt you'll end up needing this prologue. It doesn't tell much; I'm sure you can just begin your story and add this scene into the actual story. Tattered, brown ...

This is heartbreaking. Your writing was wonderful. Your best paragraph was the one starting with 'It's a lovely day out there.' In there was beautiful description and good explanation of ...

It was the second to last day of school, I was excited. This beginning isn't very grabbing. My dad and I move a lot since mom died 2 years ago. ...