GML

The two critiques above mine cover most of the little writing flaws and slip-ups. The whole "looking in the mirror" thing is pretty cliche and used to put an overload ...

Very nice. I loved the mixing of the real life conflicts of the girls and boys with the MC's whole past with her parents and werewolves. A very nice blend ...

This was written fairly well, but I would definitely change the beginning. It's not a very grabbing opening to me and seems a bit cliche. By the way, I love ...

I can't figure out how to do the whole quote thing, but for some reason the sentence "My face was turning an alarming shade of scarlet." stuck out. Don't ask ...

This is my first time on this site and yours is the first story I have gotten to read. I loved the whole "stream of consciousness" feel to the story; ...