Funkymomo

Making people uncomfortable is not reasonable justification for the censorship of art. Literature is an art form. Making people uncomfortable is part and parcel of that. Art has the power ...

I agree with one part of what aurora said- slave is a bad substitute for N******. Word choice is powerful, but there are plenty of other words in the story ...

I've lived in Maine my whole life, and we don't really censor things here. We're all kind of relaxed about life, and instead of worrying over someone who changes a ...

HAHAHAHAHAHA why wasn't I in it? GRRR. You have a good groove going, and it's easy to read, but it needs more of a point. this could be more of ...

Sparkle Tourmaline Taylor exhaled gruffly at the news. It made sense, there could only be what, ten people left? less? The gamemaker's would want a good, bloody, wide open fight ...

her front arm is a little awkwardly positioned, but that's pretty much all that I can critique! You did a good job with the rest of her, maybe a little ...

This is a bittersweet poem- I love it! It's so sad, yet you feel a little happy too. I like how you describe the bird and choose one spect about ...

It's very good, but I'll give you a few tips. A bit more of a chin would've been good, and a sharper elbow. You did really good with the clothes, ...

kill me from the mines, I quit.

Eh, I don't see what the big deal is, as Aurora said, Furthermore, words change . In the 60s, African Americans were referred to as Negroes, by themselves and by ...

Wow, these are really cool and unique. I like the bag, it looks so cool! Good Idea with the night vision or whatever it's called. You did a good job ...

Wow, these are awesome. The suns a bit bright in the first one, I have the urge to cover my eyes XD. I like the second, how the ocean flows ...

Well, I don't know who norbert beaver is, but this drawing is good! Your proportions are perfect. It's a little fuzzy, but I can still see it easily. If anything's ...

-The Confessions of a Chronic Liar- My name is Jasmine Brandon . I’m 15 years old and I am a chronic liar. My whole life is a lie. I tell ...

Wow you're great! When I try to draw faces, they look. . . bad. I think you're nose is a little small, (I'm a perfectionist :)) and I'm not positive ...