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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Night visitor

    Hey Pippiedooda, Great start, I suggest continuing this if you keep writing like this, just one thing though, I agree with Rosey Unicorn on the bold parts. Success.

    Jan 17, 2009


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins