Fullmetal13

dude this looks so cool. I saw the title for the peice and i was just like 'this sounds cool' and then i saw it. it really makes me wanna ...

i really like that it doesn't fully rhyme. It shows creativity and ingenuity on your part to make it flow like that without making it rhyme. I like the last ...

I like this. I'm not going to ultra critiqu but i really like this. It seems like everywhere when someone starts doing someone everyone else does something. It's up to ...

jas...i love you right now...i love that you're comment is the only one that hasn't totally made me rage and rant

thanks for proving my point snoink

I love that this created traphic on here. I enjoyed reading the comments. I just wanna say i don't leave cuz it was hard as hell finding this ((yes i ...

I know that this is for betterment but why not make it for freedom of speach. I haven't been able to find one like this that has as good of ...

I really love this. It makes me think of some kind of bully or someone who's just a horrible person just getting whats been coming to them. I love the ...

I just want to say that I like this site. I really do but I think this point system is a little...controlling. I think that critiqueing is taken way to ...

I'm not going to critique every little nitpick of this. I think over all your word choice was good but a little redundant. I agree that our generations falling to ...

this is wayyyyyy too long to read.......................................................................................................................................................................

How do you see me? Am I weird, not normal gross, ugly, strange or informal Do you see my beauty, beneath my skin? Do you see My pasts sins? Or ...

Dude this was freaking epic. I like the guy with all the darkness surrounding him. It reminds me of Venitas from kingdom hearts. I usually don't even like 'art' because ...