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Wow--I'm actually finding this so much easier than I thought it would be! I'm right on track for the goal (100 reviews in 15 days!) by doing 7 reviews per ...

Hi Juniper! Let me apologize for not reviewing your pictures sooner. Anyway, here we go! :) First Set Cover Pic--I absolutely love the pink flower! And how you didn't show ...

Oh, hi. Um, welcome back, I guess...? I mean, I only joined 1 month ago, so I don't know you very well. Actually, I only know who you are from ...

Whoa. :shock: That. Was. Intense. Perfect, Sara thought. Thoughts should be italicized, going with your consistent format from before. Perfect, Sara thought. Same thing. “Then I hope you don’t min

Hi, it's me yet again! Very interested in this series...please continue. :) (she had said a total of 18 words during her entire time at the school.)But Sara assumed she ...

Ooh, creepy. Definitely mysterious as well! :) First off-- Closet, there. Inside, safe. I think you can take out 'there'. Personally, 'Closet. Inside, safe.' sounds a lot better to me! ...

Hi, Nutmeg! Here I am again. :) Behind an eternal veil of darkness, shrouded in a world of ceaseless night , there stood a castle. Please add in the bolded ...

Wow! I'll say that was really good! :D certain of what to draw -- yet at the same time, I'd advise adding the hyphen in there. Without it, this part ...

Hi. :) Since you asked for more reviews, and I really liked the 1st part, here I am! :P I’m supposed to give you a tour?” She asked Change she ...

Hi, Pen! (don't mind if I call you that, do you? :)) First of all, welcome! It's great to see a gazillion people joining YWS every day! The next thing--rules. ...

Wow, you have an amazing backyard, Irish! :O Love the lens flare on the first picture--it's really nice and sort of adds to the picture, in a way. For the ...

Hi! Since you requested some more reviews, here I am! :) Humans are curious beings:inquisitive, sensitive, rash. You should add a space after the colon. :P She laughed at some ...

Whoa. Very intensified. Also, are you sure this belongs in historical fiction? Seems to me more like romantic... Anyway, on to the nitpicks! That, was when I heard the knock ...

Wow. That was really nice! :) I don't believe I found any typos, either. The especially interesting part of the story is how Cinderella seems a little reluctant to have ...

Whoa. I'll say that was intense! :) First thing: please change rating to at least 12+, because of a certain bad word in it. Again, I noticed a lot of ...