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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The man with Killer Eyes

    Hi Pen! I'm not sure this belongs in Fantasy, but I'll review, anyway! Punctuation errors. I noticed a lot of those, involving misused commas and missing semicolons/hyphens/etc. Almost all the ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: my nightmare

    Whoa. :shock: That was a little fact, I'm creeped out now.... However, very haunting! The color choices were really powerful and I think it would be obvious, even without the ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]

    Hi, Kamas, it's me again! Mind if I review your new photos? :D Luna-- Wow, this was really nice and balanced. Though I think the whiskers and the hay (is ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: First Story-- part 7

    OK, here I am, yet again! Now where's my hug...? :twisted: (Just kidding! :P) First thing--wow! Great improvement on grammar! I only spotted one teeny-tiny error. Good for you! *claps* ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Archive Re: Teen Titans: The Showdown

    So wait. If we created new characters, they wouldn't have the same powers as the taken ones, right? 'Cause I think that would be a little lame...hm...oh, I think I ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Archive Re: Flicker of the Oblivion (SSBB)

    Wow...Nutmeg and Twil have quite a bit of catchin' up to do, eh? ;) Well, I'm gonna leave 'em behind for now...:P ZSS (Zero Suit Samus) She laughed. "Zero Suit? ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Points Up for Grabs

    Ha ha, 1000 points would be nice! Although I'd be fine with 500, Galerius. Now, then, I'd use those points to save up for getting Nate to fix some site ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: First story-- part 6

    Sorry I have delayed so long. Anyway, here I am! :) Some of the grammar mistakes have already been mentioned, so I'll skip those. “What’s going on out here?” yelled ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi everyone!

    Hello, pandecary! Mind if I call you Pan? :) I am also 13 years old and love anime. I'm Chinese and also take that language, so that's so cool! Welcome ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part A

    Haha, thanks June! :) Yeah, I have a little problem with getting caught up in stories and not bothering to explain what's actually happening. Nice pointers. I'm going to have ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Is this a good start?

    Hi Pen! I'm so glad to see you're already a part of YWS! :P First off--I noticed several grammar mistakes. I hadn't had much problem trouble figuring out which bookstore ...

    Dec 9, 2009
  • Archive Re: Flicker of the Oblivion (SSBB)

    The back-and-forth, now, Irish... Zelda "Of course, Peach could just be overreacting--" Peach threw Zelda a disgusted look--"but I heard its raspy breathing, so I can't be sure that--" "Believe ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Archive Re: Zodiac2

    I take Scorpio. Bwa ha ha ha ha... :twisted: Name: Claudia Dermetreuse (Gender: Female [oh my gosh, no way!]) Age: 16 Sign: Scorpio! Yay! :P Weapon: a dagger whose tip ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Archive Re: Teen Titans: The Showdown

    Ooh, ooh! I remember watching that show when I was a tween! Unfortunately I can't watch it as much anymore, but I do still play the games on cartoonnetwork.com...hm...I call ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 100 Reviews in 15 days!

    Ah, OK. So here we go! Total Review Count: 34 Day: 3 Goal: 115 Yup, that's right! I'm aiming to get some more gold stars. In fact, after the 15 ...

    Dec 8, 2009


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