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Re: The man with Killer Eyes
Hi Pen! I'm not sure this belongs in Fantasy, but I'll review, anyway! Punctuation errors. I noticed a lot of those, involving misused commas and missing semicolons/hyphens/etc. Almost all the ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: my nightmare
Whoa. :shock: That was a little fact, I'm creeped out now.... However, very haunting! The color choices were really powerful and I think it would be obvious, even without the ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]
Hi, Kamas, it's me again! Mind if I review your new photos? :D Luna-- Wow, this was really nice and balanced. Though I think the whiskers and the hay (is ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: First Story-- part 7
OK, here I am, yet again! Now where's my hug...? :twisted: (Just kidding! :P) First thing--wow! Great improvement on grammar! I only spotted one teeny-tiny error. Good for you! *claps* ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Teen Titans: The Showdown
So wait. If we created new characters, they wouldn't have the same powers as the taken ones, right? 'Cause I think that would be a little lame...hm...oh, I think I ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Flicker of the Oblivion (SSBB)
Wow...Nutmeg and Twil have quite a bit of catchin' up to do, eh? ;) Well, I'm gonna leave 'em behind for now...:P ZSS (Zero Suit Samus) She laughed. "Zero Suit? ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Points Up for Grabs
Ha ha, 1000 points would be nice! Although I'd be fine with 500, Galerius. Now, then, I'd use those points to save up for getting Nate to fix some site ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: First story-- part 6
Sorry I have delayed so long. Anyway, here I am! :) Some of the grammar mistakes have already been mentioned, so I'll skip those. “What’s going on out here?” yelled ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Hi everyone!
Hello, pandecary! Mind if I call you Pan? :) I am also 13 years old and love anime. I'm Chinese and also take that language, so that's so cool! Welcome ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part A
Haha, thanks June! :) Yeah, I have a little problem with getting caught up in stories and not bothering to explain what's actually happening. Nice pointers. I'm going to have ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Is this a good start?
Hi Pen! I'm so glad to see you're already a part of YWS! :P First off--I noticed several grammar mistakes. I hadn't had much problem trouble figuring out which bookstore ...
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Flicker of the Oblivion (SSBB)
The back-and-forth, now, Irish... Zelda "Of course, Peach could just be overreacting--" Peach threw Zelda a disgusted look--"but I heard its raspy breathing, so I can't be sure that--" "Believe ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Zodiac2
I take Scorpio. Bwa ha ha ha ha... :twisted: Name: Claudia Dermetreuse (Gender: Female [oh my gosh, no way!]) Age: 16 Sign: Scorpio! Yay! :P Weapon: a dagger whose tip ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Teen Titans: The Showdown
Ooh, ooh! I remember watching that show when I was a tween! Unfortunately I can't watch it as much anymore, but I do still play the games on cartoonnetwork.com...hm...I call ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: 100 Reviews in 15 days!
Ah, OK. So here we go! Total Review Count: 34 Day: 3 Goal: 115 Yup, that's right! I'm aiming to get some more gold stars. In fact, after the 15 ...
Dec 8, 2009
