Fruits_Basket99Tohru

Yay, the updated version is now up! A link to it is here . Previous reviewers, no need to review, but I would like at least a couple critiques including ...

Hi everyone, it's Fruit again! Since I've made so many changes to my original draft, here's the new and improved second edition! As can be seen in the title. :D ...

Anthony He watched Andy hurry off and asked, "Ringo, you don't have much control of your emotions at all, do you?" Ringo blushed, but forced himself to clear away all ...

Hehe...nice job, Insomnia! Keep up the good work, and hope you make it! :D Anyway, my results as of today: Day 5 48 total reviews; 7 done today Remaining Reviews ...

Aw, how cute! Nice job. :D I thought it was a little weird how he (it's a he, right...?) has 2 things on his head. Just pointing that out to ...

Hey, very nice. Great photos. And also, *hint hint* *cough cough* *hack hack* Title! Money Heart--this was super cool, I think. However, as Elinor said, the loose change sorta detracted ...

Anthony He sighed. "Geez, guys. Do we really have to do this again ? And Ringo, if you were that disgusted with the Froot Loops, then don't eat them in ...

You know, I normally really don't like caricatures, but I must say you are amazing with a pencil and some paper. :) I think all the others' comments hold true, ...

Hi, Mo! I need to get my review count up, so here I am. :) For the first picture, I absolutely love the colors! Maybe you could've blended them a ...

(I think I'm just going to post my new character in the DT since we've already started the story. :)) Anthony He'd heard Ringo's latest comment and jokingly replied, "It ...

Wow--these are so amazing! I'd never be able to take photos this good... First Installment First Picture-- Very nice and pretty. The clouds are the best part, although I'm not ...

Hi again! :) I'm just spewing out these reviews... Private Mekki , only survivor of squad 2115 I suggest adding in the bolded comma and also capitalizing squad. It seems ...

Here I am, yet again! :) A review for your updated version comin' up... I commented on your opening sentence already, but I think you didn't change anything except making ...

Here we go: as of Day 4: 41 total reviews, 7 done today Remaining Reviews to Reach Goal: 74 Not quite a multiple of 7, so I might end up ...

Hey, nice job. I like your theme as far as consistency goes. :) Today, 1:11 PM: (my time zone) As you noted, the lined paper is sorta distracting and takes ...