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Re: Untitled- synopsis
I think this would more likely fit in the Writers Corner section. Yeah...'cause this isn't actually a literary work.
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]
Whoa. That was really cool! :P Picture 1--the branches are so intricate! I really liked that part. But, as someone previously said, I think, the enormous trunk could've been minimized ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Fruit's Reviews!! :D :)
Let's go, people! I'm still here, in case you didn't notice. And now, it's especially important for me to get some more reviews in, now that I'm participating in 100 ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three
Wow, nice job! This looks so much better than before! :) Now, one of the next annoying rules about punctuation, is that if words come after someone's dialogue quotation, then ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: So Cold. (Story for Forest's song contest)
Hey Irish! Hope you don't mind if I review this for you. :) First things first--ooh. This thing was really horror-ish, and sorta violent! Glad you rated it appropriately. Hope ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: FB Book 1 Ch 1 Part B
Hey everybody, this is Fruit again. :) Here's the second part of Furuba Book 1 Chapter 1! Please, enjoy. :D But here's the first part , just in case you ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Sachiko's Photo Emporium-- Photos added 3/7/10
Wow, this is amazing! I absolutely love the clarity of your photos! And yes, what is that blood-red liquid on the top of this page? Part of the Red Sea? ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Answers to Questions Everyone Has
Oh yes, Kamas, great idea! I would like to add one teensy-weensy detail, though. You can customize your personal title after reaching 250 posts. I think that question was answered ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter three
Hi, it's me yet again! I really like this series. :) Hope you post part 4 soon! and a Vorog team uncover s a secret of pure horror Add bolded ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Punctuation within Dialogue
Excellent article--this definitely helps me! I remember making one of those mistakes in my first piece of writing posted here on YWS...:) Let's see--it was the first mistake in your ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Diligence: The Positive Form of Stubbornness
Oh my gosh, I can't believe no one has done a review on this yet! :O Probably the first criticism remark I can make after reading through this is the ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: 100 Reviews in 15 days!
Oh dear. I really need to work on how many reviews (good ones, mind you) I can do in that amount of time! The maximum amount of reviews I could ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Smash Bros. New Adventure Story (1st edition)
Haha, thanks Mo. :) I'm so glad you liked it! Ah, Octo, in answer to your thoughts, yes, LiQian is Chinese. That's right--I'm really proud of my Chinese Heritage, and ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Lonely?
Aw, this is really nice, Mo! :) In return for your kindness to me, I will also review this for you! First off--I think the lines could be cleaned up ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: (Unnamed) chapter one
Hi, it's me again! :) You have a couple reviews on this already, so I'll be nit-picky and gritty. The Lizarians and humans make a great discovery, and attempt to ...
Dec 6, 2009
