FrreakyStyley

Thanks for the review :) Yeah I felt a bit iffy about that line too..haha I'll probably end up changing it! Thanks again :)

I really enjoyed this :) It was a nice length, and it held really lovely imagery. The concept was pretty easy to understand, yet at the same time managed to ...

Seriously good poem, beautiful imagery and unique style. Nothing bad to say :)

This is just a prologue I've written as I was planning on beginning a novel. It's only my first draft, so it's probably pretty bad.. It was, yet again, a ...

That was a really interesting and original poem :) the story behind it, the imagery and the language were all very unique. I found the concept really interesting, I felt ...

Hey, great poem :) there was a really cool balance between the objective viewing of dawn occurring and the more familiar sight of how it effects the things surrounding us. ...

I loved that poem! At first I was simply enjoying the swift tempo and clever rhyming, until it reached the second half, and took on a new meaning. It becomes ...

Hey, I really liked this poem :) It was really emotive and it was clear that you put a lot of feeling into it. I loved the end where the ...

Hey, thank you for your review :) I really liked this poem, as it was quite evasive yet held strong imagery. I especially liked the fourth stanza, I really thought ...

This is my first post..I don't really know what's going on.. but here goes! Moisture Ridden Bed Bidden One last beat, drumming heart of mine. Gentle Flinching, Eyelids pinching With ...