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  • Short Story » General, General Re: All Hallows Eve

    Hey there, I loved this story (couse it is a horror stroy so like Audrey I love it). You do have a few errors that you can work on in ...

    Nov 1, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Im Going To Hell

    You have really good idea here, but the the flow of the story is what I call "jagged." The last few paragraphs mainly, I think you need to add some ...

    Nov 1, 2010


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