Frenchchilla

writer 4 all my life: I liked it but it needs punctuation, but I didnt like the flow maybe you could add rhythm or rhyme and maybe you could put ...

I liked it. It really got the point across, but I think that you could have tried to break up the line at better point to make them shorter but ...

Loved him I did, but did I really? Only I know what I hid from the people who love and care for me. Why did I do such a thing? ...

good but I thought that It could have ended better and I KNEW IT I KNEW THAT YOU FELT LIKE THAT AND YOU ARE FINALLY TELLING PEEPS...okay now that is ...

I like it there was really good imagery but I agree with "Incandescence" but I think it was an overall good poem.

Prologue On a night as black as coal, upon a small pool, a cat approached. With what little light the moon created only the faint outline of the cat could ...

I'm gonna join I just have no time to write it right now

I really like it, the rhyming was good and it was really good but I thought that at the end it kinda stopped with an awkward line But I dunno..

Hey good writing I liked a lot of the ways that you described the objects within your poems and uhhhh I couldn't have written it.........