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  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Divers

    Kelpies, Thank you so much for your kind comments. Sadly I am a terrible proof reader so that is why there are a few errors. Indeed the land they discovered ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Divers

    Thank you for your critique. I enjoy your style of what went well and what could be better, very good. My grammar has always been a bit suspect but I ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Divers

    Thank you, that means a lot to me. First time I have shared my writing

    Jul 10, 2014


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