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FreddieJacobs

  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Divers

    Kelpies, Thank you so much for your kind comments. Sadly I am a terrible proof reader so that is why there are a few errors. Indeed the land they discovered ...

    Jul 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Divers

    Thank you for your critique. I enjoy your style of what went well and what could be better, very good. My grammar has always been a bit suspect but I ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Divers

    Thank you, that means a lot to me. First time I have shared my writing

    Jul 10, 2014


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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