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Re: An Existence Mundane
I thought this poem was unique and quite interesting, the opposite of mundane! :P I love the rhyme scheme, especially since it is coupled by great lines. I like the ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: An Existence Mundane
An Existence Mundane Frustrating and dense, a needless pretence. Why am I tortured by glares so intense? Scared icy eyes, corrupts your insides. They shackle madness and beauty, and flies. ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Why I'm Afraid of Dogs
Really brilliantly written, the intricate and sophisticated use of vocabulary really help your argument. However, I think that for dealing with the issue of your phobia in this style this ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Oh the beautiful land
Pretty awkward paragraphing to read man, you could try laying the page out a bit better but w/e it's not a big deal. This is truly abstract and interesting. I ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Why Slipknot are good.
I do not dislike Slipknot because I think they're music is overtly superficial or that "they are a reincarnation of Satan". I am simply dissuaded by their sinister and blatant ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: What does a totalitarian country consists of?
Totalitarianism has an almost inconceivable variety number of ways in which it dominates those unfortunate enough to become entangled within it's tendrils. Aside from the obligatory and superficial as
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Blood Red
I really enjoyed this story, regardless of how capricious it is. Sometimes I prefer stories which end abruptly, it creates a vivid sense of depth for your stories meaning. This ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Concrete Cannibals
Thank you for you're review man, it's great to get some genuine and critical feedback for once. I'll take what you said into account, I fully understand that my beginning ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Concrete Cannibals
This is very much an experimental piece of literature, criticism would be VERY much appreciated Concrete Cannibals A tall, cracked mirror leaned precariously against the walls of prison cell 14-C. ...
Jul 24, 2010
