FrankProchazka

Thank you kindly for your appreciation of my poem, I'm glad the emotion wasn't lost in my hopelessly verbose and dramatic style.

Thank you for your kind words.

Husk. Overnight your canine passed away Warm tears float the day astray. Regret seems to singe as it melts Silence drowns in the plastic pool of sorry. Noise and colour, ...

Some generic imagery but In a poem as obnoxiously patriotic as this one it doesn't really matter.

Very elegant and beautiful poem, thank you for writing it. I was wondering whether or not your poem was partly based on the masterpiece of Dvorak's opera about the water ...

Really cool poem. I like the simple, dreamlike style you invoke. Don't stop, please.

I liked it, the style was enticing and I generally favour poems which are left open to vivid interpretation. Try and improve your vocabulary.

One of my best friends is a girl who finds herself extremely frustrated by the incessant ambiguity and agenda orientated worlds of teenage girls, I can on some level empathise ...

Cool poem, it's interesting to see how well people transform simple words into complex ideas.

Thanks for the review blackbird. I must say I'm intrigued by the prevalence of murdering psychopathic avatars in this thread. I'm dismayed by the realisation that, most likely, my reason ...

Thank you, Kylan. I've only recently taken up the hobby of recreational writing and the opportunity to receive encouragement and criticism from far more experienced writers, such as yourself, is ...

Thank you, I will try more thoroughly to avoid clichés in the future.

A Birdless Summer Degradation of the soul brings a strange macabre cold, which chills the rosiest heart and decays the purest gold. In an unconscious ocean, in perpetual motion, life's ...

10/10. Beautiful. You've adopted the exact kind of style I love.

I must tell you though for future reference, avoid centering lines of verse at all costs. It's most often the mark of an amateur writer, because it rarely serves any ...