Frangipani

Thank you for your comments! Gahks, I really like the line "Yet I see a glimmer amid the abyss". I added this in. It works really well; thanks! I also ...

I like this poem a lot, but as aforementioned, it could do with a bit more length. And then, the world ended. The stars fell down like tear drops, I ...

Wow. This is really, really... beautiful. Stunning. I really liked it. petals swirling, sun approaching, no sweet nothings, I like the way you ended the stanza there, but left it ...

The trickling sands of our time, Slowly disappear beneath us. And we are plunged. Without warning. Without hope. This dark abyss that we cannot escape, Just falling. Falling until we ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It flows extremely well, and keeps the reader interested and captivated. I thought the way the first stanza had an extra line made it unique. ...

Wow, I really, really liked this. I love the line "framed within precise dimensions". I really liked the way to flowed, but I prefer the way Aedomir set it out ...

What I do is start from somewhere in the middle, or wherever you are inspired to write, and work backwards. Writing the first chapter last is a good idea, because ...

Thanks for your replies, guys! Well, I am active on another forum [I moderate there] so I'm kind of used to forums, but this still all seems... well, big. ^_^ ...

Hey dudes! Well, I decided to join here because it's for young writers. I've tried out some other forums before, but didn't really like them. This one seems awesome! I'm ...