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Re: Wondrous Mother Earth
What a beautiful poem! I also admire and really like nature! I really like the imagery in this poem. It just makes the reader visualize like the "violet flower" and ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Possession
Hello! I really like this poem. I really like how you center on the word unavailable. For example, "Unavailable is a beautiful word I am Unavailable My tongue curves around ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: The Chronicles Of Color
Hello! I just wanted to say that this is a very unique poem. Quite interesting! I could tell that you were naming things that were colored blue and things that ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Teddy Bear and His Used Heart
Teddy Bear and His Used Heart … Imprisoned in a room filled with monsters, Teddy Bear stares at the white-washed walls. They hold the answer to a question- Ever since ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Cliches in Poetry
This is a really helpful article! I actually try not to use really worn-out cliches. Instead, I try to reinvent cliches in order for them to unique. Thank you very ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Once You Were My Best Friend
Hello! Your poem was quite interesting. I like how I can easily feel your emotions and experience that feeling. For me, I think poetry should just give the reader a ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Rhyme...all the time!
This definitely helped me! Thanks!
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: The changes within
I really like this poem. I am happy that you cross-rhyme in this poem. Great job! For example, "I’m moving forward, But to what end? Is this the emergence of ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Seashore memories
Hello! It's me again! I absolutely like this poem! I truly like the message in this poem, which is, to me, a remarkable sight will always stay in your memories. ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Rain
Hello! I really like this poem! I like the main idea in this poem, which is, to me, the speaker wanting to be one with the rain and be taken ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Doll is Waiting
Blanketing the ground, sugar-like snow… … Atop a dead branch, a dark and disturbing crow. … Not a person in sight for kilometers. Not even small or big critters… Eyes ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: My Conviction
Hello! I really like this poem! It is very interesting. I especially like the message in it, which is to escape reality, write to your heart's content. That's a really ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: A Perfect Image
Hello! This is a great poem! I really like this poem! I like the imagery in the poem and your vocabulary. The poem's imagery is visually interesting and your vocabulary ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Although My Life is Passing by
Hello! I must say- this is a really good poem! I like the rhyming scheme and the end-rhymes in the poem, especially "think" and "brink," "ask" and "task," and "pass" ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows
Hello! I really like this poem. I just really like your vocabulary and the imagery in the poem. Your vocabulary is just so intricate and the imagery is just so ...
Apr 3, 2011
