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Fran94

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Wondrous Mother Earth

    What a beautiful poem! I also admire and really like nature! I really like the imagery in this poem. It just makes the reader visualize like the "violet flower" and ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Possession

    Hello! I really like this poem. I really like how you center on the word unavailable. For example, "Unavailable is a beautiful word I am Unavailable My tongue curves around ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Chronicles Of Color

    Hello! I just wanted to say that this is a very unique poem. Quite interesting! I could tell that you were naming things that were colored blue and things that ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Teddy Bear and His Used Heart

    Teddy Bear and His Used Heart … Imprisoned in a room filled with monsters, Teddy Bear stares at the white-washed walls. They hold the answer to a question- Ever since ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry Tutorials Re: Cliches in Poetry

    This is a really helpful article! I actually try not to use really worn-out cliches. Instead, I try to reinvent cliches in order for them to unique. Thank you very ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Once You Were My Best Friend

    Hello! Your poem was quite interesting. I like how I can easily feel your emotions and experience that feeling. For me, I think poetry should just give the reader a ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Poetry Tutorials Re: Rhyme...all the time!

    This definitely helped me! Thanks!

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The changes within

    I really like this poem. I am happy that you cross-rhyme in this poem. Great job! For example, "I’m moving forward, But to what end? Is this the emergence of ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Seashore memories

    Hello! It's me again! I absolutely like this poem! I truly like the message in this poem, which is, to me, a remarkable sight will always stay in your memories. ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Rain

    Hello! I really like this poem! I like the main idea in this poem, which is, to me, the speaker wanting to be one with the rain and be taken ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Doll is Waiting

    Blanketing the ground, sugar-like snow… … Atop a dead branch, a dark and disturbing crow. … Not a person in sight for kilometers. Not even small or big critters… Eyes ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My Conviction

    Hello! I really like this poem! It is very interesting. I especially like the message in it, which is to escape reality, write to your heart's content. That's a really ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A Perfect Image

    Hello! This is a great poem! I really like this poem! I like the imagery in the poem and your vocabulary. The poem's imagery is visually interesting and your vocabulary ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Although My Life is Passing by

    Hello! I must say- this is a really good poem! I like the rhyming scheme and the end-rhymes in the poem, especially "think" and "brink," "ask" and "task," and "pass" ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows

    Hello! I really like this poem. I just really like your vocabulary and the imagery in the poem. Your vocabulary is just so intricate and the imagery is just so ...

    Apr 3, 2011


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