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By the Road Bouquets of flowers- lilies and orchids- stuck in the ringlets of the fence. Dirt and tumbleweed cross the road. Candles- with Jesus, Joseph, or Mary on them- ...

Hello! I love this! I want more, too! I've absolutely fallen in love with this short story. Keep writing!:)

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Hello! I have to say this is an interesting poem. First off, I suggest that you don't put :( as your title because, normally, people write words that make the ...

Hello! This is a pretty good poem! I can tell that the poem's main idea is that the girl the speaker talks about hides her love for the boy with ...

Hello! I just wanted to review one of your works. Anyway, I think this poem is a pretty good poem. I really like the imagery, which is very visually interesting. ...

Hello! I think this poem is better than the other one I reviewed. I really, really, really like the imagery, the concrete details, and the message in the poem! The ...

Hello! This is a pretty good poem, even if it is a bit vague. To start off, kudos for keeping your rhyme scheme consistent! My high school teacher once said ...

Hello! This is a very well-written and, at the same time, confusing poem. Yet, I see what is going on. There are two people talking here, I think. One is ...

Hello! I like this poem! I really enjoy reading it! I really like the imagery and how concrete it is. For example, "Your vision's blurred, The world obscured, By snow ...

Hello! I hate to admit this, but... I don't really like this poem. Okay, this is me just being blunt. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, my review ...

Hello! What a brilliant and well-written poem! I must say, you have quite a knack for writing poetry. Well, so far. I'd have to look at your other poems that ...

Hello! This is truly an emotional poem. I can feel the sadness and pain in this poem and can really understand what the speaker is saying. The speaker is saying ...

Hello! I have to say great job it is very good! I really like the imagery in this! For example, "Wild, rapid movements, / With which I express myself." Now ...

Hi! Once again, you have proven that you can touch someone's emotions and, at the same time, keep them interested in the poem. In the poem, I felt your pain ...