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Re: Not My Daughter
First of all, that's so sad. I feel bad for your neighbor. It's completely unfortunate when this happens to a loved one, or even someone you know. Please, young man, ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Beautiful Boy
Oh my gosh, this song is heart melting. If I were a boy, I would be falling for you(: Whoever this boy is, he's stupid not to fall for you. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Nightrise
Feature? I think yes! Anyways: Described in one word: Lovely(: This is the second poem I have reviewed in the past 10 minutes that has a red font... am I ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Abyss
Hi, I'm Forti(: I agree with what has been said, formatting this to the center would improve this piece. One question: What is with the red font, is that emphasizing ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Broken Glass Girl
Hi Spook, I'm Forti(: Lemme just say that your poem was good. A few awkward sentences, though. For example: Spook said: But keeps a piece of glass And now she’s ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Get Carter Unfinished
First of all... Hi, I'm Forti! P.S., Love this movie!!!!! I feel like your writing style is very good and the actual movie Get Carter is related well in your ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Messed. Up.
Hey Teen, I'm Forti. Weird that you describe yourself as a teen weirdo, because it just so happens that I describe myself the same way! Anyways, loved this! A few ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: One with the Ocean
Hey Kit! I'm Forti, I don't believe we've met(: I'll just cut to the chase, loved the poem. I live near the ocean, so this is a poem that has ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: :D
Photo 1: Love the striking colors! The way the clouds cover the sun setting is absolutely gorgeous. It almost looks like it's a painting by a famous painter, like Picasso. ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Why?
WHat is the theme of the song? I feel like the writer is a mother of a little boy, and the boyfriend/father figure is being abusive to the main character ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Lemons
This is a story I found on my computer that I wrote for my English class last year(: Italy. One of Europe’s main exporters of lemons. Which bring me to ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
Me next? Can I be my pirate panda avvie????
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Light
Light he sun, the moon and the stars I suggest a capital on the T's on the Stars appear on velvet sky Comma after sjy as those cheerful sun beams ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: You'll See
"Call- mph." I tried to tell him to stop but his lips had already captured mine. He was always doing this! Always taking advantage of situations like this. This part ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Fortissimo's Poems
Just realized I'm disqualified because I won't make the requirement of 20 poems. Ohh well, I'll finish it anyway. Computers (#13, 4/25/2011) I hate computers, they never cooperate, they are ...
Apr 25, 2011
