ForsakenAngel

Hi, Sakin here! First of all, wow! I love this. Congratulations this made my night. You're a very talented person, I give you that. Keep writing! Other than the points ...

Thanks guys! And in that part--"This man, name unknown to me, is not alive, Nor is he dead."-- I wasn't saying 'this man who's name is unknown to me..." I ...

Hi there. First of all, I really loved this. Second, you did an amazing job at painting a picture in my head. I couldn't really see anything wrong with this ...

Hi, this is very lovely! Ok, there is just one thing, I'm kind of wondering if it's correct or not. The pain inside has now subside... I think it would ...

Dang woman, when I asked to review something I didn't realize you would ask me to read something this long! lol but I like it! I didn't really see anything ...

Hi, Sakin here! This is really amazing and I love the way it paints a picture in the reader's mind. In the topic, the point you are trying to get ...

Hey, Sporky :D I like this, it's pretty cool! It deserves a 'like' ^.^ ~Forsakinshadow~

I say fantasy because it allows me to escape to an imaginary world where anything can happen. (I'm a nerd ^.^) ~Tabitha~

Hi, Sakin here. I like this! It's childish in a way, yet mature. It's very unique. Keep writing stuff like this, it could get you somewhere, because this is cute. ...

Hi, so, one word comes to mind when I read this. Wow. This is offficially my favorite poem in the world! You're amazing! I love how you make it all ...

Hi, I'm not sure I know you, but I love how sophisticated this sounds. The last little bit of it--Hebrew?--is confusing, seeing as I don't know Hebrew :D But this ...

Yea, I'm half asleep and bored. Sorry this sucks so much, I've been having random thoughts and if I don't write them down, or type them up, I'll never remember ...

Hi, Sakin here. First off, Shiney1 is right on those points. Other than that, I don't see anything else wrong with this. I don't think I've read anything else of ...

Hi, Sakin here! I love this, it has something sweet about it. I'm not sure I've ever read any of your poetry before but this reminds me of something else ...

Hi, it's me again! First, I'm really starting to like you. All of your poetry has this feel to it that I can't quite put my finger on. It's unique ...